The5key words about the witches

 

We have been learning about the5key questions. We read about the witches and wrote about it. My favourite part was when the Grand High witch took her mask of and when she was ugly. 

I liked it because it was interesting.

By Sema 

summer at Mersey vale

We walked  round the grounds. We talked about how things grow in summer

Super shine

 Devises. 

By                                                                         We used a three trick pro noun and a retorcal  

Logo. 

We thought of super shine. This brand name stands out because it will make your kitchen very shiny

Persuasive devices

Persuasive devices are devices that you use to persuade someone to buy your product we used rhetorical question our one was do you need a clean kitchen? We chose it because it was simple. By Ronnie and Eliana

Speed shine devices we used

This our script and devices we used. We used 3 trick as our persuasive sentence are 3 trick is " It will make kitchens, clean, fresh and germ free".

Persuasive devices we used

The brand name is Mega dirt blaster because it's persuasive and it's a better buy.Plus it attracts you to buy it, it is only £1.50 buy one get one free.If you buy Mega dirt blaster you will have the cleanest kitchen in the hole town! Our slogan is STRONG AND QUICK.Our logo is a design of the picture of our product.

By Hamzah and Elias

Judging the winning campaign

We created a voting system to find the best marketing campaign. We made three buzzers to press when we saw something that we liked, like good persuasive devices.

By Will.i.am and Jaw.ar.i.ah

Devices

Devices are persuasive techniques  that you use to persuade people to buy them them , we use them because it makes our advert better 

By Victoria and Maddy 

Soaper shine roles

Dad:Luke

Soaper shine:Madina

Signs:Alisha

Camera:James

Persuasive devices

A persuasive device is skill that persuades someone to do what you want them to do. we had to include three devices we did a 3trick strong dark an powerful rhyme don't worry we've got super shine

 one wipe and it will vanish in no time and superlative do you want the cleanest table? 

And it's a rhetorical question by kian

Speed shine logo

This is our logo.It is called speed shine.

script

A script is instructions of what the characters have to say our script has loads of persuasive devises scripts have persuasive devises because then people our more likely to buy the product.Maddy

Camera soaper shine

The camera man holds the camera to film the advert.Our camera boy was James y4 he is good at filming adverts but sometimes he cuts some bits off by accident

Slogan

a slogan is a short sentans or fraze are slogan was sparkle gives germs the boot.   By Eliana

camera

A thing you use to film or take pictures of something,our camera woman was Ronnie,you take videos of things so the whole world can see your product.

Designing soaper shine

Soaper shine is a kitchen cleaner that is made by mrs soaper shine.Its made with the slogan it's so soaper because it sounds like its super it's set in the kitchen

Slogan

A slogan is a memorable phrase or sentence.Our slogan is sparkle gives germs the boot.We chose it because you want to get rid of germs and have a clean kitchen. 

By Ronnie

Logo

Our logo was a superhero called mrs soaper shine she was a hero with a sponge and a bucket of water and she is very clean to show that the cleaner is the cleanest ever and everyone will buy it because the bright and clean logo is very persuasive

Bottle design

A bottle design is designing the label,our label has our name and slogan on it.We have labels so people know how much things cost and who they were made by.

By Maddy

   Speed shine advert

 

Logo

We made the logo to present our product. We agreed on our logo by making different logos and choosing one out  of four. Our logo was a picture

Brand name

A brand name is the name of a product,we decided  by listening to other people in our group.It is persuasive by people will like shiny things and fast things.

Slogan

A slogan is a short sentence what is sharp,my group slogan is 10 seconds then it's gone.We did it by adding all of are ideas.

By Umar

Slogan

Our slogan is "ITS SO SOAPER". We came up with it because I came up with the idea  and everyone agreed with it so we got that slogan because it's sharp and short and very interesting and people will love it.  

Logo

A logo is a picture that represents the the brand name. Our brand name is SUPER SHINE we called our product SUPER SHINE because it shine's like the stars by kian.

Speed shine advert

In year four we are doing a blog about a persuasive advert that we have created.

My brand name is an eye catching tittle to attract people to try, the name I chose is "speed shine".

Once in the market people won't buy other products after using this one.

By Ali

Logo

A logo is a picture that represents the product. Our logo was a boot kicking the germs away.I chose that logo because  people want clean kitchens and people will want to buy it because there won't be any germs and there kitchens will be clean.

By Victoria

Brand name

Our brand name is soaper shine because we had a vote and the top 2 got put together to make soaper shine. It is eye catching and ear-catching and soaper sounds like it will clean the kitchen and work very well. Shine will make it sound like it will make the kitchen shine.  

 

Brand names

In year four, we each created brand names to go with our products. A brand name is an instantly recognisable name like Mr Muscle.

Year 4 persuasive adverts